TalonRider

The last I heard from Jamie, chapter 44 was with AJ.He didn't say which edit it was in. Depending upon things go, and the size of the chapter, a chapter can go thru edits before it reaches the beta stage. For the beta stage, Jamie sends it to me, I then send a copy to Ricky who reads it, then sends it back to me with his suggestions. I then combine his with mine. After this is done, I run it thru a program that reads the chapter to me. Once I'm done with it, I send it back to Jamie and he decides what suggested corrections to accept, then sends it on to be posted. As soon as I know something more, I'll let you know.

Chapter 69 has been posted.

Another case of when your name is Richard, you shouldn't go by Dick. Dick Sloppy.

Chapter 68 has been posted.

Chapter 67 has been posted.

Chapter 66 has been posted.

Chapter 65 has been posted.

I first heard this on the radio show, then this morning, the local Fox station aired it. Back in the 1930's into the 1950's, this guy served four terms as mayor in Fort Wayne, IN. The city is naming a new building after this guy and it's stirring up things. People are objecting saying that it will make Fort Wayne the butt of jokes. The name, Harry Baals.

Chapter 64 is posted.

Chapter 63 has been posted.

Chapter 62 has been posted.

Chapter 43 is now posted. Don't forget your tissue.

After a delay, due to illness, Chapter 61 has been posted.

You can expect to see chapter 43 posting the weekend of January 22nd. It's now in beta and would be pushing it to have it ready any sooner.

I too, keep a copy of the stories that I like and re-read from time to time. Gives me something to do when I go to visit family and friends and everyone is at work. You should see my file folder for Jamie alone. I have one flash drive dedicated to him alone.

Some authors do their own editing and do okay with it. Then there's others who are so bad, I've quit reading the story.

I only warn people as some don't mind it, while others may not like it. Most will still read it.

Kyle has been a long time Hosted Author at Gay Authors and is one of the reasons Myr got interested in hosting stories. It is mainly because of the adult/youth scenes that the story doesn't appear publicly. Now with GA Stories, that may be changing. It will be posted with a strong warning. I've told people that if they can get past the adult/youth sections, they are in for a good story. When I know it's posted, I certainly post a link to it.

UPDATE: Kyle has updated the first 25 chapters and will be sending chapter 26 to Myr some time next week for posting at Gay Authors.

Chapter 60 has been posted.

Early in part 2 of book 2 we are given a clue that there is another Agramon. Jamie finds that hidden file about Nic. As he's about to close it, he see's some information about another. It's toward the end of his first meeting with Giovanni, that he picks up on something from him. Later on, he gets a sample of Giovanni's blood and later gives it Stephan to be analyzed, which confirms who he is.

How Jonathan came into being, we may never know unless it comes in a future chapter. Of course, the identity of the Oracle was kept secret to protect him. Not even Hippolito knew it and imagine his surprise that there is now two Red and Blacks that are now the head of a House. I'm thinking more in the lines of partnerships formed by Icarians. In our society, we have couples who have been together for years and consider themselves partners. Some places now allow it legally. Remember, Jamie includes a lot of different issues in today's society into this story. I think this was engineered into them, besides what was already there. We know from the history lessons we've had that Agramos loved de Valen, but never acted upon it. We know that Edmond Croal created Jamie and Charlie, so whoever created Niklas von Agramon, also created Giovanni and Jamie is the only one who knows Giovanni really is. No one knows who sent him to the school to eventually meet up with Jamie.

The Red and Black that was in Edmond Croal's office that day was not Charles. Several minutes after the hov left Villa Mare Vista, and was well out of sight, was destroyed. We also changed time for a short period to find Charles signing the order, then switched back.

Chapter 59 has been posted.